This is a story I did for writing follow up in a workshop. My workshop was on The Game of Awesome which we learnt with Mrs Roach.
101 slimy eels
Ding the bell rang me and my friend Hannah were really excited because us and or mums are going on a camping trip. and as soon as we got home we went to my room to pick up our bags and put them in the car. mum gave me and Hannah some food and we set off for camp. when we arrived we set up our tent and put our sleeping bags on the flour and went to sleep. In the morning we had breakfast and headed to a river. when we got there we saw a room on the other side of the river and went inside. we walk down a corridor and saw 101 slimy eels I feel sick I said. we saw a sign that said please keep away from the 101 slimy eels. we all ran away and went back to the river.after we went to the river there were eels coming out.Thanks for reading.
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Hi Molly, That is a frightening story. I do not like eels, especially slimy ones! I do not think I will ever go camping again. I really enjoyed your story. I like writing funny stories.
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